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Post by gaza on Aug 12, 2017 5:35:35 GMT -5
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Post by llama4president on Aug 12, 2017 6:03:11 GMT -5
nice work, do you draw over screenshots (as draft for the scenes) or is it all totally drawn?
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Post by gaza on Aug 12, 2017 6:24:55 GMT -5
thanks, give me your guess first.
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Post by llama4president on Aug 12, 2017 15:44:26 GMT -5
from the detail, proportions and perspectives i do see, i would think you got some that used screenshots as bases (mostly the landscapes), some other that make mixed use of hand drawn art and small parts from screenshots(close ups), and some other that seem totally hand drawn(some other close ups, and the first table).
all of this digitally colored and hand drawn over.
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Post by Amleth on Aug 12, 2017 16:34:01 GMT -5
It just looks like filtered screenshots (posterising, edge-finding, etc), maybe with a bit of touch-up and manual colouring underneath?
Also, isn't this manga/manhua edition? It reads right to left. (Although within some panels the order switches back to left-to-right...)
There's a few spelling/grammatical errors, too. e.g. "too serious", "too weak", but then "to slow". "possible" instead of "possibly", missing plurals; "missle" instead of "missiles"; etc. Not a big deal since English is obviously not your native language, but you should still run the script through a spell/grammar check in Word or something. Also, ellipses "..." have three dots (which many of yours have), not two (which many of yours also have), and not more than three (which a few of yours have). The ellipsis is a standard grammatical symbol just like "?" or "!". Just three dots.
Lastly, abbreviations like "u" and "ur" look ridiculous outside an IM/text message. Please don't do that.
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Post by gaza on Aug 12, 2017 18:13:34 GMT -5
from the detail, proportions and perspectives i do see, i would think you got some that used screenshots as bases (mostly the landscapes), some other that make mixed use of hand drawn art and small parts from screenshots(close ups), and some other that seem totally hand drawn(some other close ups, and the first table). all of this digitally colored and hand drawn over. thank you for your guess..i used screenshot for all this stuf...  |
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Post by gaza on Aug 12, 2017 22:33:55 GMT -5
It just looks like filtered screenshots (posterising, edge-finding, etc), maybe with a bit of touch-up and manual colouring underneath? Also, isn't this manga/manhua edition? It reads right to left. (Although within some panels the order switches back to left-to-right...) There's a few spelling/grammatical errors, too. e.g. "too serious", "too weak", but then "to slow". "possible" instead of "possibly", missing plurals; "missle" instead of "missiles"; etc. Not a big deal since English is obviously not your native language, but you should still run the script through a spell/grammar check in Word or something. Also, ellipses "..." have three dots (which many of yours have), not two (which many of yours also have), and not more than three (which a few of yours have). The ellipsis is a standard grammatical symbol just like "?" or "!". Just three dots. Lastly, abbreviations like "u" and "ur" look ridiculous outside an IM/text message. Please don't do that. thanks for your suggestion english is my 3rd language, not really good here |
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Post by fιяєfℓαмє on Aug 12, 2017 23:20:39 GMT -5
Nice!I have Gareth and gonna buy Jesse.
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