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Post by tolmyking on May 13, 2020 11:53:51 GMT -5
I didn't read most of it but the parts i did read has some peculiar scenes, no? It's been a while since I read it all the way through myself. The idea of the story was in my brain since I was a teenager and read that Mazinger comic in the library. When I finally got around to writing it, I had a couple of false starts until I decided to take inspiration from games. It was still a struggle in the end to tie it all up. Honestly, I don't consider it my best story, but it was my only attempt with mecha so it kinda fit here. I posted it back with Pix started releasing lore for the game and we had a member here who was writing his own novel based on the game so I dusted off mine and posted it. I don't have many stories finished. I have one that I started writing but lost inspiration after about 30 chapters. I do better with short stories and have written some fan fiction. Yeah but it has the nasty-nasty scene
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Post by Koalabear on May 13, 2020 11:55:56 GMT -5
Really? I thought I kept it pretty PG-13.
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Post by fiannaidhe on May 13, 2020 12:00:09 GMT -5
All right bruh. I was doing research on happy fun ball and bruh. How did some of these words pass through the lagauage filter. Bruh. Bruh. bruh... Which words? I wrote the story so long ago... I don't think I had any actual swear words, even though the site where I'd originally posted the story had no language filters. I was going for a sci fi/fantasy feel and took inspiration from Battlestar Galactica for swearing. BSG is the only language i actually understand
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Post by tolmyking on May 13, 2020 13:43:30 GMT -5
Really? I thought I kept it pretty PG-13. I cannot tell if that is sarcasm or not
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Post by Koalabear on May 13, 2020 15:00:04 GMT -5
Really? I thought I kept it pretty PG-13. I cannot tell if that is sarcasm or not It wasn't. When I wrote the story, it was after another story I'd written that was dark and definitely not PG-13. So, when it came to the "naughty" parts, I tried to keep as much of it in the imagination as possible. It's supposed to tickle the adolescent male's libido (and middle-aged men too).
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Post by tolmyking on May 13, 2020 15:03:06 GMT -5
I cannot tell if that is sarcasm or not It wasn't. When I wrote the story, it was after another story I'd written that was dark and definitely not PG-13. So, when it came to the "naughty" parts, I tried to keep as much of it in the imagination as possible. It's supposed to tickle the adolescent male's libido (and middle-aged men too). Bruh momento
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Post by oncethedevil3 on May 13, 2020 15:38:46 GMT -5
Yeah! Schoolboy level soft 「popcorn」 included.
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